30. Editing (Ending Scene 1)
Scene 1 ended with me painting over the lens of my camera, to then "seamlessly" fade into the red of the sunset.
The sunset never showed red. Plus I had decided to remove the entire shot of zooming out of the sun anyways, so there was no point for it at all. Moreover, I kept looking directly in the lens every time I tried to put the paint on, when I should be looking straight forward.
Not to mention, I didn't even angrily walk out of the room, this ending was doomed to fail.
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